Wednesday, August 3, 2016

Olympic Narrative I think this is the best work one this year.

Olympic Narrative


On the Olympics I was versing a boy named John and he was the fastest kid in his school that he went to and we the same age. When we were going to start the race I had to do my shoelaces and have a drink of water before we started the race.

Then we started the race and John was coming first but then I was coming first because I was running my best and because I was running as fast as I could go. And when we were almost went to the middle of the race I tripped over a rock and I fell on the ground and John said”Oh no she tripped over a rock and she fell on the ground,”.

After that I was still on the ground and John kept on going to the finish line then he thought how it would be if I was sad that I tripped over a rock and I lost by it so that was when John came back and helped me up from the ground we both ran the whole way to the to the finish.And we went to the finish line and we both got a trophy each by touching the line at the same time and we both got what we wanted a trophy.